EdwardNight's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[RicePirate]

Where's the rice, mate?

[Roofies]

I'd say I could see where you were going with this, except I can't. There seems to be no indication of what you're driving at, and the lack of photorealism cannot be saved for that reason. If there were some concept behind the image, some kind of real statement, the flat buttocks and microscopic hands (among other indiscretions) would be forgiveable.

[Not anymore]

You are the first artist in this contest I've reviewed who actually did something with your subject's body. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

I can't seem to find any complaints or criticisms to make. I love the way you reflected the light globules on her body. I love the subtlety of the chains with which you constricted her wrists. I love the mine off in the background hanging upwards by another chain. This picture really is worth a thousand words.

HappyEndings responds:

Thank you! :)

[The Snake]

...intriguing.

[Lyra]

The focus of your next practice section should be nuance. Take a look at some artful nude phootography or paintings. Note the poses the subjects take, the contours of their bodies, and how they use all this to make a statement that may have nothing at all to do with their nudity or may speak volumes about it.

Also, work on your detail. You've got your style down. Now, it's time to refine your shading, your fine lines, and your final shapes. The subject's right leg is a clear victim of a lack of attention to detail.

I like this work, but only because I can see the potential of the artist.

Mittensx33 responds:

Thanks a lot :)
It's my first time drawing anything like this so I need all the advice I can get.