All 3 art Reviews


RicePirate RicePirate

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Where's the rice, mate?



The Snake The Snake

Rated 4 / 5 stars

...intriguing.



Wind Wind

Rated 3 / 5 stars

The shading on the body feels right, but her face seems too flat. Also, her lips and nose are... off. They're not mispositioned. They're just... um... off. Your hands aren't bad, though I can see two fingers at least that could use some retouching.

I like what you did with her hair and her head, but you didn't really do much with her body. Give her some action. She's shaking her hair around while she's buck naked. Why? Use her pose to give her some purpose.


Kinsei responds:

You were a lot more generous on the subject of the hands that I would have been. Ahh well I'll keep trying to practice them so I can draw them better.

The face, the face is a serious flaw of this piece. I should have reworked it. The nose looks broken, and the rest looks like it was smashed with a board.

The pose could have had a little more motion add to it. Perhaps a bit more twist in the torso.